Now, I'm not the type of person to get annoyed easily, but this causes me pain, anguish and anxiety. It really gets under my skin. I know you're sitting there like 'what is it?'; you're just ready for a nap. But the statement is this: Dogs should be kept on leads on public footpaths. I know, I know. It sounds really stupid - so I'll tell you why.
One day, I was riding on my bike, minding my own business, and this devil-like creature came out of nowhere and starting running towards my bike. I squeezed my brakes as fast as humanly possible and my bike skidded across the dust-ridden ground. The dust flew up around my bike and all I could hear was the yapping of that dog. The owner furiously came running over, repeatedly saying 'sorry' and picked up the dog and walked away. I just stood there shell-shocked. I don't know if you have had an experience like that, but I was shaken up for the rest of the bike ride.
There are many other reasons why dogs should be kept on leads such as: dogs scaring wild animals such as sheep, running over to little children and knocking them over. But let's turn the tables real quick. How do the owners feel? I believe that they feel as scared and terrified as us. They feel saddened by these moments in life.
If dogs would keep their leads on while on a public footpath the world would be a better place.
One day, I was riding on my bike, minding my own business, and this devil-like creature came out of nowhere and starting running towards my bike. I squeezed my brakes as fast as humanly possible and my bike skidded across the dust-ridden ground. The dust flew up around my bike and all I could hear was the yapping of that dog. The owner furiously came running over, repeatedly saying 'sorry' and picked up the dog and walked away. I just stood there shell-shocked. I don't know if you have had an experience like that, but I was shaken up for the rest of the bike ride.
There are many other reasons why dogs should be kept on leads such as: dogs scaring wild animals such as sheep, running over to little children and knocking them over. But let's turn the tables real quick. How do the owners feel? I believe that they feel as scared and terrified as us. They feel saddened by these moments in life.
If dogs would keep their leads on while on a public footpath the world would be a better place.
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ReplyDeleteThe humour in this was particularly engaging, wasn't it?
Miss C.